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出句:一了百了白不了;(陈昌国)全仄 |
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发表于 2025-1-24 13:17
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谢谢妙对。您是按照今音写对句,我是按照古音写出句。这样做有时行得通,有时行不通,得看出句是尊从什么样的联律。祝好敬茶。
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