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【佳联赏析】凌一二格言联选(之七) |
点评
校对:
难事无如管住嘴;
平仄平平仄仄仄/×
仄仄平平平仄仄/联谱
好书有待读开怀。
仄平仄仄仄平平
平平仄仄仄平平/联谱
依据联谱校对:
上比第五字~
"管"平仄错误:三仄尾。
辨析:
有待(动词)=/=无如(连词)
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